Eyeless Jack

๐Ÿ“… Published on January 5, 2013

โ€œEyeless Jackโ€

Written by Azelf5000
Edited by Craig Groshek
Thumbnail Art by Craig Groshek
Narrated by N/A

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โฐ ESTIMATED READING TIME โ€” 2 minutes

Rating: 9.53/10. From 55 votes.
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Hello, my name is Mitch. Iโ€™m here to tell you guys about an experience I had. I donโ€™t know if it was paranormal or whatever stupid words people use to describe supernatural phenomena, but after that thing visited me, I believe in that paranormal trash, now.

A week after I moved in with my brother, Edwin, after my house was foreclosed, I finished unpacking. Edwin liked the idea of me moving in, since we had not seen each other for 10 years, so I was excited, too. I soon fell asleep after I moved in. After that first week, I heard rustling noises coming from outside at about one in the morning. I thought it was a raccoon, so I ignored it and tried to fall asleep. The next morning, I told Edwin about it, and he agreed.

The next night, however, I thought I heard my window opening and a loud thump, as if something entered my room. I darted up and looked around my room, but I saw nothing. The next morning, Edwin dropped his coffee cup when he saw me. He held up a nearby mirror and I saw myself. I had a large gash in my left cheek.

After I was rushed to the hospital, my doctor told me that I must have been sleepwalking, but then he showed me something that made my blood turn cold. He lifted up my shirt to reveal a sewn up incision where my kidneys were. I stared into his eyes, mine widening. โ€œYou somehow lost your left kidney last night,โ€ my doctor told me. โ€œWe donโ€™t know how, though. Sorry, Mitch.โ€

Photo by Nickteezy408

The next night was my breaking point. Around midnight, I woke up to see a truly horrifying sight. I was staring face to face with a creature with a black hoodie and dark blue mask with no nose or mouth staring down at me. The thing that scared me the most was that it had no eyes. Just empty, black sockets. The creature also had some black substance dripping from its sockets. I grabbed a camera from the nearby mantel and took a picture.

Immediately after taking the shot, the creature lunged at me and tried to claw open my chest to get to my lungs. I stopped it by kicking it in the face. As I ran out of my room, I grabbed my wallet. I would need the money. I ran out of my brotherโ€™s house into the night. I eventually ended up in the woods near Edwinโ€™s house and tripped on a rock.

I fell unconscious and woke up in the hospital. My doctor โ€“ the same one who treated me before โ€“ entered the room. โ€œI have good news and bad news, Mitch,โ€ my doctor started. โ€œThe good news is that you had minor injuries, and your parents are going to pick you up.โ€ I sighed with relief. โ€œThe bad news is that your brother has been killed by someโ€ฆย thing. Sorry.โ€

My parents took me back to Edwinโ€™s house to collect my remaining belongings, which I did. Upon entering my room, I was scared, but remained calm. I grabbed my camera and then stopped dead in my tracks. In the hallway leading to my room, I saw Edwinโ€™s body and something small lying next to it. I retrieved it up and entered my parentโ€™s car, not mentioning Edwinโ€™s corpse. I looked at the thing I had picked up and nearly vomited. I was holding my stolen half-eaten kidney, with some black substance on it.

Rating: 9.53/10. From 55 votes.
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๐ŸŽง Available Audio Adaptations: None Available


Written by Azelf5000
Edited by Craig Groshek
Thumbnail Art by Craig Groshek
Narrated by N/A

๐Ÿ”” More stories from author: Azelf5000


Publisher's Notes: The original Eyeless Jack story was inspired by a photo by DeviantArt userย Nickteezy408ย โ€“ which is featured on this page โ€“ and which can be foundย here.

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Noah
1 year ago

Wish it was longer

Aries
Aries
4 months ago
Reply to  Noah

wish it was anything that tells us his backstory, like Jeff’s on here. I always think the cult one is cannon for Jack.

Nightshade
1 year ago

i have always loved his story the most for some reason.c

Aries
Aries
4 months ago
Reply to  Nightshade

the cult one? that’s my personal favorite as well.

Alexia
Alexia
9 months ago

It was a little disappointing and interesting at the same time but over all a great story I loved it ๐Ÿ™‚

underyourbed
underyourbed
1 month ago

I was absolutely terrified seeing that photo it is 4:00 in the morning and all my lights are out in my house To no exaggeration I almost threw up when I saw that fucking thing

underyourbed
underyourbed
1 month ago
Reply to  underyourbed

It was a good story though I liked it

Luvcreeps
3 days ago

Why is it so short ๐Ÿ™

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