The Gator Gospel

📅 Published on April 9, 2025

“The Gator Gospel”

Written by Rhett Monroe
Edited by Craig Groshek
Thumbnail Art by Craig Groshek
Narrated by N/A

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Part I

There was something in the tape that defied explanation. Claire Morse had watched it more than a dozen times since the envelope first arrived, but each viewing stirred the same unease—an itch at the base of her neck, a vague stirring behind her eyes. The footage, corroded and warped from decades of humidity and poor storage, depicted a man in a white robe standing waist-deep in water, framed by cypress trunks and Spanish moss. The image wavered, and the color bled into jaundiced hues, but the man’s voice was clear.

“Not all gods are above us,” he said, eyes unblinking, hands held open like cracked porcelain. “Some wait beneath. Patient. Hungering. Pure.”

It was the kind of line Claire would usually dismiss as theatrical nonsense—manufactured madness by men desperate for power or penance—but there was something about his cadence that lingered. He didn’t shout. He didn’t tremble. He spoke as though he had seen it himself, and the memory of it had hollowed him from the inside.

The man on the tape was identified only once—his name spoken by a woman off-camera, whose voice cracked as she whispered it: Jasper Ray. The name hadn’t surfaced in her research until now. No Wikipedia entry. No obituaries. No arrest records. Just the occasional mention in fringe forums and the private blogs of burnouts and ex-believers. They all said the same thing: he was once a televangelist, the kind who promised healing through a screen, until something pulled him off the airwaves and into the muck.

The envelope that contained the tape had also held a folded tract—damp, yellowed, and stinking faintly of mildew. On the back, someone had scrawled a set of GPS coordinates in black marker. The handwriting was shaky but deliberate, the strokes heavy and dark, as if the author had been determined to make sure the numbers lasted longer than the paper. Beneath the coordinates, in cramped red ink, was a single sentence: “He knows you already.” 

Claire had been working on her documentary for nearly a year by then. Gods of the Forgotten South was the working title, though no one besides her and her editor had seen any cuts yet. It was her attempt to document the dwindling remnants of regional cults and backwoods theologies—the ones that never made headlines but survived in whisper and superstition. This wasn’t the first time someone had sent her something unmarked and ominous, but it was the first time she’d felt compelled to follow through without hesitation.

She rented a vehicle in Tallahassee—a high-clearance SUV that smelled like leather and chlorine—and plotted a course through backroads that peeled away into narrower dirt trails, lined with brittle pines and gas stations that still accepted cash only. At a sheriff’s office near Calhoun County, she stopped to ask if anyone had heard of Jasper Ray or “the mouth beneath,” as one of the VHS tapes described it.

The deputy on duty, a sunburnt man with eyes too tired for his age, shrugged as he leaned back in his chair.

“Old preacher,” he said. “Used to run a camp out near Ocheesee. Some say he got rich. Some say he lost his mind.” He paused, then added, “Lot of folks stopped going out that way after the storm. Roads washed out. Too many gators.”

When Claire pressed for details, he grew cagey. “Look,” he said, tapping the brim of his hat. “Swamp’s not a place for strangers. You step wrong, something’ll take you. Might be a snake. Might be worse. Just don’t look too long into the bog. That’s my advice.”

By the time Claire left the station, the sky had begun to fold into itself, taking on that deep amber hue unique to Florida evenings in late summer. Thunder rumbled in the far-off clouds, but the rain held back, as if watching.

She drove until the roads ended and the GPS directed her to continue along a sandy path barely wider than the SUV. Cypress roots rose in tangled knots on either side, and dragonflies stitched lazy patterns above the shallow water. The deeper she pushed into the Panhandle, the more it felt like she was being swallowed.

The vehicle’s tires crunched over gravel and shells, the air thick with the smell of algae and gasoline. She passed no homes, no landmarks—just long stretches of wetland and thickets of palmetto that whispered when the wind moved through them.

Eventually, the path narrowed to the point where she could go no farther. She stepped out and adjusted her pack, taking the handheld camera from its case and slinging it over her shoulder. The GPS showed she was within a mile of the marked location. The rest would have to be done on foot.

The trail was nearly invisible—no more than a game path winding through brush and stagnant pools—but it led her forward with a strange sense of inevitability. Her boots squelched in the mud. Mosquitoes clustered at her wrists and neck. The sun dipped behind the trees, and the sky turned the color of bruised peaches.

Then, all at once, the trail opened.

She stepped into a clearing where the last rays of sunlight shimmered on rusted metal and broken glass. Before her stood a crude compound—three trailers perched on cinderblocks, a collapsed pavilion with a tin roof, and several shacks built from salvaged wood and plastic sheeting. Wind chimes fashioned from bird bones and bottle caps hung from the eaves. Prayer flags—white, hand-painted with spirals and open jaws—fluttered listlessly in the air.

There were people, though none of them moved.

They stood beneath the structures and along the porch railings, silent and barefoot, dressed in white. Their faces were streaked with clay or ash, and their eyes followed her with neither hostility nor welcome. Just observation. Just stillness.

Claire raised the camera instinctively, but something in her gut told her not to press record just yet.

She stood there, unmoving, letting the lens hang slack against her chest as the figures continued to watch. There was no sound but the insects and the distant groan of frogs from deeper in the swamp. No one spoke. No one approached.

The sun disappeared.

And still, they stared.

Part II

The man who emerged from the far trailer wore a linen robe, bleached and frayed at the hems, though the cut was unmistakably ecclesiastical—like something out of a revival tent lost to time. His hair had thinned to pale tufts that hung like cotton strands around the ridge of his scalp, and his beard had turned the color of sunbaked limestone. His skin was loose and deeply wrinkled, but he walked with measured confidence, barefoot across the warped boards of the porch.

Claire recognized him at once. Even aged and withered, the fire in his eyes had not dimmed. It was the same fire captured in the tape—the same deliberate calm beneath the surface of each sermon, the same weight behind every syllable.

“Miss Morse,” he said, the name lifting from his tongue with the familiarity of an old friend. “You’ve come a long way.”

She didn’t answer right away. The air between them was still, suspended like a bead of oil in water. A dozen faces watched from the darkened porches, their expressions unreadable.

“I take it you’re Jasper Ray,” she said, her voice steady, though her throat was dry.

“I was,” he said, nodding. “That name don’t mean much now. Not since I was filled. Now I’m what the Mouth made me.”

He descended the steps and stepped into the soft soil without hesitation, the ground sucking gently at his heels as he approached.

“We’ve been expecting you. The Pale One knows His vessels long before they arrive. Yours is a soul of clarity, Miss Morse. Of utility.”

Claire kept her hand close to the strap of her camera, though she didn’t raise it. “I’m here to observe,” she said. “I’m not a participant.”

“You’ll find the line between the two thinner than you expect,” Jasper said, “but come. There’s comfort here, and more to see in the light.”

He gestured, and one of the followers—a middle-aged woman with sharp cheekbones and a chain of fish bones woven into her hair—stepped aside to open the creaking door of the nearest trailer.

Inside, the air was pungent with the scent of wood smoke, dried herbs, and damp cloth. The walls had been covered in overlapping pages from old hymnals, stained with moisture and curling at the corners. Shells and clay teeth had been pressed into the wooden beams, arranged in spirals and jaw-like ridges. A shelf near the window bore a crude idol shaped from white clay—an open mouth, ringed with lines like tendons or roots, its edges flecked with crimson wax.

“This is Gator Haven,” Jasper said, following her gaze. “Built atop the place where He first rose.”

Claire sat on a low stool as he settled across from her, folding his hands over his knees. The camera remained idle in her lap. Though the air was heavy with heat and humidity, Jasper didn’t sweat.

“You speak about the Pale One as though it’s real,” Claire said.

He smiled knowingly. “That’s because he is. As real as breath. As real as the hunger that lives beneath our thoughts. He’s old, and He is beneath, and when the world dries up, He will drink what’s left of us. That’s not doom, Miss Morse. That’s salvation. We don’t run from being eaten. We prepare ourselves to be worthy of it.”

Claire’s pen moved over her notebook slowly. She resisted the urge to look at the camera or check the recording levels on her audio device.

“You preach digestion as a kind of grace?” she asked.

“Digestion is the final unity,” he said, raising one bony hand. “You and I—flesh and bone—are separate from each other. From the land. From time. The Mouth ends that separation. It pulls us in and dissolves us. Not into nothingness, but into wholeness. Into Him.”

She felt the words curling at the edges of her thoughts, like seaweed brushing her ankles in dark water. There was a rhythm to his speaking that bypassed her logic and needled at something deeper, something older. She had interviewed dozens of cult leaders before, each with their own version of the end, but none had spoken so calmly about being erased.

The heat inside the trailer pressed inward as dusk fell. Outside, cicadas buzzed with mechanical insistence. Claire blinked slowly, and for a moment, the room seemed stretched—its corners pulled ever so slightly away from each other, as though the walls were breathing.

She cleared her throat and stood.

“I need to get some rest,” she said. “It’s been a long trip.”

Jasper rose with her, his joints popping quietly. “You’ll stay here. There’s room enough. No one will bother you.”

He gestured to a back room, partitioned by a curtain of knotted twine and shells. She nodded, offering no further questions, and stepped inside. The cot was narrow and slightly damp, the sheets stained from years of use, but she didn’t care. Her limbs ached, and her thoughts felt spooled out too thin.

Later that night, the sky outside the single window had faded to deep indigo. Claire sat cross-legged on the floor beside the cot, the audio recorder balanced on her knee. She pressed play and let Jasper’s voice wash over her again.

The words came through clearly at first, though something about the timbre was off—slower and deeper than she remembered. As the recording progressed, the pitch began to shift. What had once been coherent preaching began to melt into vowel-heavy syllables, as though the language itself had been warped in transit.

Then, beneath it, something else began to speak.

The second voice was quieter, rasping beneath the frequencies of the human range, but the equipment picked it up nonetheless. Claire adjusted the gain and replayed the segment.

It wasn’t Jasper.

It wasn’t anyone she had heard before.

It was low and deliberate, and it spoke her name—twice.

Claire.

A breath.

Claire.

The syllables were backward. She played it in reverse. It came out the same.

She sat still for a long while, staring at the recorder as the cicadas outside went quiet all at once.

She didn’t sleep that night.

Part III

The next morning began without ceremony, without alarm. Claire stepped from the trailer before sunrise and found the air thick with mist. The compound had already begun to stir. Silent figures drifted across the clearing in pairs and trios, white-robed and barefoot, their movements measured, almost choreographed, as though pulled along invisible strings.

Jasper stood at the edge of the water, his robe stained darker at the hem where it touched the mud. A young woman, perhaps in her twenties, knelt before him in the shallows. Her shoulders were trembling, not with fear, but with something closer to reverence. Around her, a semicircle of followers stood ankle-deep in the swamp, watching without sound.

Claire stood back, half-hidden behind a sun-faded porch beam, her camera raised to eye level. She didn’t press record—not yet.

Jasper placed both hands on the woman’s head and spoke softly. Claire couldn’t make out the words, but the tone had the same hypnotic quality she’d come to expect from him—gentle, patient, brimming with finality.

Without prompting, the woman leaned backward, allowing herself to be lowered into the water until only her face remained above the surface. Jasper held her there, his palms pressing down against her collarbones, until her features disappeared entirely beneath the tannin-stained murk.

Claire counted the seconds. Five. Ten. Fifteen.

At twenty-three, the surface broke again.

The woman rose with a gasp that was not a gasp—more a reverent intake of something sacred. Her mouth stretched open as if to scream, but no sound came. Instead, her eyes rolled upward and settled on the gray morning sky, and her lips parted in a whisper that carried, somehow, through the dense air.

“He is so full,” she said, her voice trembling. “So full.”

Jasper stepped back without speaking. The others moved to surround the woman, their arms outstretched, not to comfort her but to touch her, lightly, with open palms. Some pressed their hands to her shoulders; others to her ribs, as though confirming she still breathed.

Claire lowered the camera. She hadn’t recorded. She wasn’t entirely sure why.

Later that morning, as the mist gave way to a low-hanging haze, she walked the compound’s perimeter, mapping her bearings in silence. The structures appeared older in daylight, their weather-beaten facades revealing seams of rot and rusted nails. The idols—open-mouthed sculptures crafted from clay, driftwood, and bone—were more numerous than she’d realized. They adorned every corner, wedged between boards, suspended from branches, buried halfway in the soil like teeth mid-chew.

Behind one of the collapsed storage sheds, where wild vines had begun to reclaim the foundation, she found a boy crouched beside a pail, striking a match against the rim of a metal bucket. The cigarette between his lips had been rolled by hand and shook slightly in his fingers.

He was thin, with sun-browned skin and a mop of damp, unwashed hair. A puckered scar ran from his right ear to the edge of his jaw. When he noticed Claire watching, he neither startled nor retreated. He looked up with narrowed eyes.

“You with them?” he asked.

Claire hesitated. “I’m just observing.”

He smirked, but there was no humor in it. “That’s what they all say at first.”

She stepped forward, careful not to disturb the ash-colored moss clinging to the edge of the shed.

“You have a name?”

“Ricky,” he said, then gestured vaguely behind him. “Ricky Collins. My folks came here when I was a baby. Don’t remember much else.”

He glanced at her camera, still slung over her shoulder.

“They let you film, then?”

“They let me,” she said. “But I’m not sure I want to.”

He snorted, took another drag, and exhaled slowly.

“They only show you what they want you to see. The pretty parts. The baptisms. The songs. The sermons that sound half-human. You think that’s the story? You think that’s the whole shape of the thing?”

Claire didn’t answer. She reached into her satchel and retrieved a notebook, flipping it open to a blank page.

“What aren’t they showing me?” she asked.

Ricky glanced around, then leaned closer, lowering his voice to a near-whisper.

“My uncle—he came out here after the big hurricane. Helped build a lot of the camp. He used to say this was a Christian place back then. Just folks trying to find peace in the swamp. Jasper showed up after, sometime after the storm, and he brought… something with him. Or maybe it brought him. Depends who you ask.”

He flicked ash into the bucket.

“Uncle started talking about things beneath the water. Said the gators out here weren’t normal. Said the big one—white as bone and blind in one eye—wasn’t a gator at all. Said it watched him in his sleep.”

Claire leaned in. “Did he leave?”

Ricky’s mouth twitched. He looked away.

“He tried. Packed his things in the middle of the night, didn’t tell nobody but me. I was ten. I helped him carry his bag to the edge of the bog.” He paused. “He never made it. Jasper said he fell in. Said the swamp takes those who aren’t ready.”

“Do you believe that?”

Ricky ground the cigarette out against the pail’s rim.

“I believe I haven’t seen him since,” he said. “I believe the thing they worship don’t live on this earth like we do. And I believe if you stay too long, you stop caring what it is.”

Claire’s pen hovered above the paper, unmoving. The silence between them deepened.

“I could show you the places they don’t let you film,” Ricky said finally. “After dark. If you want the truth.”

She nodded.

That night, Claire dreamed in shades of silt and bone. She was barefoot, walking across a flooded field where the sky pulsed a dull orange and the water refused to reflect her image. Beneath each step, the ground gave way with the sound of cracking teeth. The mud was warm and slick, and with every movement, her limbs grew heavier, dragged by currents that moved without direction.

She saw lights beneath the surface. Not reflections—eyes.

She felt hands touch her ankles—fingers like driftwood, smooth and cold and impossibly long.

Somewhere far behind her, someone was calling her name, but her ears no longer recognized it as hers. She walked until the water swallowed her chin, then her mouth, then the top of her skull.

When she woke, the window above her cot was dark. Her chest rose and fell in shallow waves. Her hands, resting at her sides, smelled faintly of clay and something metallic.

She sat up slowly, pushing the damp sheet aside. Her boots, which she had left near the door, were soaked through as though they had been submerged.

Outside, the frogs had fallen silent again, and something was moving through the reeds just beyond the range of the porch light.

Claire didn’t check the camera. She didn’t need to.

Part IV

By midmorning, the humidity had grown oppressive. Clouds hung low and unmoving, their undersides stained a greenish-gray, and the air vibrated with the chorus of insects that never seemed to stop. Claire found Jasper beneath the pavilion, seated on a wicker stool draped with frayed burlap, speaking in low tones to a pair of children no older than ten. When she approached, he dismissed them with a nod, and they vanished into the tall grass without glancing back.

“I want answers,” she said, standing just outside the reach of the shadow cast by the tin roof. “You said I was a vessel. That I’d been expected. What does that mean?”

Jasper smiled softly and folded his hands in his lap.

“It means exactly what it sounds like,” he replied. “We are all vessels, Miss Morse. You’ve simply reached the point where yours must be poured out.”

“I came to document,” she said. “Not to take part.”

“But you’ve done both,” he said, tilting his head slightly. “You’ve recorded. You’ve watched. And still, you remain. You didn’t leave when the truth scratched at the edges of your sleep. That is consent, in the oldest sense.”

She opened her mouth to reply, but he raised one hand—not to silence her, but to gesture toward the waterline, where a line of robed figures was already forming.

“You should witness,” he said. “It is time for a Reckoning.”

Claire followed as he rose and led her through the compound toward the swamp’s edge. The congregation had gathered in a crescent along the bank, their robes wet from the knees down, their heads bowed. The water, once stagnant, now swirled with slow but visible motion, a circular current churning around a sinkhole marked by a ring of white stones. The smell of sulfur clung to the air, sharp and unnatural.

At the center of the clearing, flanked by two silent men holding staffs made from stripped cypress, stood Ricky.

His hands had been bound with twisted vines, the green still fresh in them, and a strip of cloth, soaked dark at the corners, had been tied across his eyes. He was shirtless, and along his ribs and back were fresh welts that hadn’t been there the day before.

Claire stepped forward, but Jasper held out his arm to stop her.

“What is this?” she asked, keeping her voice steady.

“He broke communion,” Jasper said quietly. “He sought to flee the mouth, rather than offer himself to it.”

“He’s just a kid.”

Jasper did not respond. He stepped past her, raised both arms, and began to speak—not loudly, but with such precision and rhythm that even the wind seemed to pause to hear it.

“He who walks away from the mouth walks back into hunger. He who resists the swallowing does so with pride. Pride is the bark of false trees. And false trees bear rotten fruit.”

The crowd responded in one voice: “Let him be tasted.”

Claire’s camera remained cold and lifeless against her hip. She could not remember when she had stopped recording things. She only knew she didn’t reach for it now.

The two men on either side of Ricky led him forward. He did not resist. His legs moved steadily, one step after another, until he stood at the edge of the swirling pool. The smell grew stronger. Something beneath the water gave off a heat that should not have existed.

Without ceremony, the men lifted him—not high, but just enough—and lowered him into the dark spiral. His legs vanished first, then his waist, and then, with a slow, almost reverent motion, his chest and head.

There was no sound. No splash. The water swallowed him without resistance, as though it had been waiting for this shape to complete it.

The ripples continued for several seconds after he disappeared. Then, they stopped.

No one moved.

Claire stared at the surface until her vision blurred. The circle of white stones remained undisturbed. The only indication anything had changed was the absence of Ricky’s presence beside her.

Jasper turned to her and gestured for one of the followers to approach. The woman who stepped forward carried a shallow bowl fashioned from the hollowed shell of a snapping turtle. Its contents shimmered with pale clay, streaked through with something dark and glistening.

The woman dipped her fingers into the mixture and, with great care, smeared it across Claire’s cheeks, her forehead, and finally, the center of her chest. The clay was cold, but her skin burned where it touched.

“Your time comes at next water’s rise,” Jasper said, his voice as calm as ever.

Claire wanted to ask what he meant. She wanted to demand answers, to scream that she was leaving, that none of this was acceptable, none of this was lawful or sane. But the words never reached her mouth. They formed and dissolved before she could give them shape.

She stumbled back to her trailer without speaking. Her limbs felt sluggish, her thoughts hollowed out and rearranged. The doorway seemed narrower than it had before. The cot lower to the ground. Her belongings, carefully organized on her first night, had been shifted. Her clothes were damp, though no rain had fallen. Her camera had been disassembled and cleaned, though she had no memory of doing so.

And her crew was gone.

There were no messages. No bags. No sounds. The two assistants she had brought with her—both seasoned, both level-headed—had simply vanished. She called out, but only the frogs answered.

That night, the swamp began to hum.

It started low, just beneath hearing, a vibration that rattled the panes in the window and made her molars ache. The chimes outside spun in opposite directions, though no wind moved through the trees. She stepped out into the clearing, hoping to find someone—anyone—but the compound was silent. No fires burned. No voices whispered.

She walked to the trailhead, the path she had taken on her arrival. It was still there, in shape, but wrong in texture. The trees that had lined the way in now leaned inward, their roots exposed like grasping fingers, and their trunks twisted in slow spirals.

She walked for several minutes before realizing that the trees ahead of her were growing upside down—their branches anchored into the earth, their roots reaching for the sky.

The path had turned back on itself.

Or the swamp had turned around her.

She returned to the trailer just before dawn. Her skin was clammy, and the clay on her chest had hardened into something like stone. Her breath tasted of iron, and her fingertips smelled faintly of rot.

She did not try to sleep. There was nowhere left to dream that was not already his.

Part V

The light that preceded dawn that final morning did not resemble the gentle hue Claire remembered from childhood. It had a different quality—muted and oily, as though filtered through something thick and invisible. It coated the trees and grasses in a dull sheen and gave the water the pallor of old bone.

When Claire emerged from the trailer, the compound was already awake. Dozens of the faithful moved about without speaking, weaving between structures and brush in practiced formation. Someone had dressed her while she slept—or while she had not resisted sleep, whichever truth she was prepared to accept. Her clothes were gone, replaced by a robe of soft, unbleached linen that hung just above her ankles. Her hair, usually tied back or hidden beneath a ballcap, had been brushed and braided, and into those braids had been woven tiny bones—vertebrae of birds or squirrels, cleaned and smoothed by water and time.

They shimmered when she moved.

The clay on her chest had been renewed. A fresh sigil marked her sternum, circular and layered, resembling a spiral opening of jaws nested within jaws.

No one spoke to her as they passed. They merely glanced in her direction, then looked away.

She was led, barefoot, through the edge of the compound and down a winding trail that cut between reeds and cattails. Along the way, rusted lanterns had been hung from iron crooks driven into the earth, each flame flickering pale and slow, as though burning in some thinner atmosphere. The light they cast shifted constantly, curling around tree trunks and across the shallows.

The deeper they walked into the marsh, the more the world seemed to contract. The trees no longer swayed. The insects no longer buzzed. The air held no scent. There was only the sound of wet footsteps and the low, almost sub-audible murmur of the faithful as they passed through the trees.

Claire had stopped trying to record. Her camera had been left behind, though she could not recall doing so.

The path ended at a circular clearing—an open stretch of dark water ringed by torchlight and crude altars built from stone and shell. The pool at its center stirred with unnatural motion, neither tidal nor windborne, but deep and slow, as if something just below the surface breathed in intervals too vast for human lungs.

Jasper stood at the water’s edge. His robe, though similar in cut to the others, was dyed with lines of ochre and rust, forming a pattern that radiated outward from his heart. His feet were bare. His face was calm.

He raised his hands and spoke—not loudly, not in chant, but in a voice that felt preordained, as though read from a text that did not exist in any human tongue.

“Now is the time of hunger,” he said. “Now is the time of opening.”

The crowd answered in unison. The words meant nothing to Claire, and yet they nestled into the folds of her mind like pieces that had always belonged there.

Jasper stepped into the water, and it parted slightly around him, as if anticipating his presence. He did not pause. He did not wade or hesitate. He simply walked forward until the water reached his chest, then his shoulders, then the base of his throat.

There, he stopped.

The surface shivered.

Claire saw it before she understood what it was.

From the center of the pool, the water bulged upward—not as a wave, not as movement—but as emergence. The mass that rose was pale and smooth, the color of buried ivory, slick and impossibly large. It did not break the surface so much as rewrite it, forming around itself a dome of perfect silence.

An eye opened.

It was not the eye of an alligator, though it bore some superficial resemblance. It was large, spherical, and impossibly clean, with a milky iris and a vertical pupil that dilated outward into a shape that could not be described without contradiction. There were rings within it—symbols etched along the curve, not by scar or evolution, but by something intelligent and ambitious.

The air around the pool tore, not with sound, but with pressure. Claire felt her teeth hum in her skull. Her vision fractured at the edges, each movement of her head accompanied by subtle echoes of motion that did not belong to her body. Time slipped. Light bent.

Jasper tilted his head back, and the eye looked upon him.

He was smiling.

He sank.

It happened without drama. One moment he stood before the god, arms outstretched, and the next, he was beneath the surface, pulled down with no splash, no ripple, no sign he had ever existed beyond memory.

The water did not calm.

Instead, it spread.

The pool expanded, not with flooding, but with distortion. Trees bowed inward, their branches elongating. The sky turned a color Claire had no name for, and beneath her feet, the earth softened, pulsing with warmth that did not belong in this season, in this state, or in this century.

Claire’s knees buckled.

She fell to the edge of the pool, hands submerged in the black substance, which was no longer water but something thicker—something aware.

The world shattered inside her mind.

She saw cities collapsing in reverse. She saw mountains rising, not from tectonics, but from flesh petrified beneath impossible pressures. She saw the first man kneeling before a cavern rimmed with teeth, offering his own tongue in gratitude. She saw language unfold from the grinding of jaws, the syllables of a thousand tribes born not of communication, but of survival. Every story, every myth, every word—chewed and spat and reshaped into doctrine.

And she saw herself.

Not as she was, but as something peeled back, something flooded with understanding so pure it felt like drowning. Her fear bled away, flensed from her mind as the Pale One looked into her—not with eyes, but with hunger, perfect and dispassionate.

Her mouth moved before she knew the shape of what she would say.

“I understand.”

And the water replied, with acceptance. She had passed from resistance into purpose. She was no longer a visitor, nor even a witness. She was now part of the congregation, part of the liturgy, part of the digestion that never ceased.

She rose on unsteady legs.

The faithful knelt before her.

Claire stepped to the shore as the Pale One withdrew into the deep, leaving behind only a gentle current and the stink of forgotten tides.

Later, when the sun had returned and the swamp once more resembled the place she had first entered, a camera rested at the end of the dock. Its battery light blinked red. Its lens, clouded with moisture, faced the pond’s still surface.

The recording remained uninterrupted for hours, and though no one stood before it, and no voice spoke into its frame, it captured something nonetheless.

A ripple.

A distortion.

A slow rise and fall.

A whisper from below.

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Written by Rhett Monroe
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